bigraphy victor de alba-my grandfather
Juan Murillo was borned in Campanario, Extremadura in 1933. He was studying mechanics in Campanario when he met my granmother and they fell in love.
When he was 25 years old he came to work in the -Transports de BCN-. Later, he turned to Campanario to get married with my grandmother(Cati). A few months later they came to Barcelona to live. They had two daughters and one son.
My granfather has been lot important in my life, because when I was a child my mother was always with my brother helping him to study and my father was working, so I always was with him and he taken me to the park to play with the ball and having fun, he always was who came with me to my friends parties because my fathers couldn't bring me, so I really love him and he is the most important person in my life. He always knows the form to make me laugh when I'm sad or I have a bad day.
Víctor De Alba.
When he was 25 years old he came to work in the -Transports de BCN-. Later, he turned to Campanario to get married with my grandmother(Cati). A few months later they came to Barcelona to live. They had two daughters and one son.
My granfather has been lot important in my life, because when I was a child my mother was always with my brother helping him to study and my father was working, so I always was with him and he taken me to the park to play with the ball and having fun, he always was who came with me to my friends parties because my fathers couldn't bring me, so I really love him and he is the most important person in my life. He always knows the form to make me laugh when I'm sad or I have a bad day.
Víctor De Alba.
Hello Victor. I just read your composition and I really liked it! It is very emotional and I can see the nice relationship you have with your grandfather. I saw one mistake in your composition. It's in the first line, when you say ''Juan Murillo was borned...''. This ''borned'' shoud be a ''born''. The rest of the composition is alright for me. I hope you have a good day and take care of your grandfather!
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